tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post9059071429975284299..comments2024-03-01T12:54:02.773+01:00Comments on Tommyslav's Island: PLEASE BREAK MY HEART (EPISODE 6)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00423572800834564668noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-20315110909754299582013-07-13T23:18:42.047+01:002013-07-13T23:18:42.047+01:00You said it was her mum's 20th remembrance, he...You said it was her mum's 20th remembrance, her mum died on her first birthday, shouldnt that make her 21, how did you jump to 24?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-53243499928099348382012-11-24T17:31:47.930+01:002012-11-24T17:31:47.930+01:00Good work though still needs a lot of work especia...Good work though still needs a lot of work especially with punctuation marks and paragraghs. It makes reading easier and better understood.<br /><br />Also there are inconsistencies in the story. You said you mother died on your 1st birthday and it is her 20th aniversary. This should put you age at 21 and not 24 as stated. All the same, well done.<br /><br />Thank you<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-81373035026725298462012-03-16T20:54:29.981+01:002012-03-16T20:54:29.981+01:00Hmmm...nice to read such views about the story. Ke...Hmmm...nice to read such views about the story. Keep reading!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-27564607748546001732012-03-16T20:54:26.205+01:002012-03-16T20:54:26.205+01:00Hmmm...nice to read such views about the story. Ke...Hmmm...nice to read such views about the story. Keep reading!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-72967608099105371162012-03-16T02:04:42.950+01:002012-03-16T02:04:42.950+01:00Happy-wts d mr nce guy al abt,nd ds jake hpe she w...Happy-wts d mr nce guy al abt,nd ds jake hpe she wont end up faln 4 hm,wel dt wil b nce!gud wrk dearie,luv d suspence dt is d iv leter...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8148089199891582581.post-40350636042230192492012-03-14T01:30:09.338+01:002012-03-14T01:30:09.338+01:00Dis one that dare is becoming unnecessarily nice, ...Dis one that dare is becoming unnecessarily nice, are we safe?evergreennoreply@blogger.com