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EPISODE 29 – THE FINALE
I
swung the front door open and raced down the lane. It wasn’t about my wet hair
dangling around my neck, or my white bathrobe or the slippers. I hadn’t thought
about it for a second. Tola was in danger thanks to our negligence and maybe my
David was too.
The
roads were blocked. Estate security was on the patrol, I looked ahead as people
gathered, chattering almost indistinctly. I caught glance of Tola’s Range Rover
as I approached the police mark. “Let me through.” I shouted as I started to
push them away from their clusters. Some pushed back and I was partially
sandwiched as I tried to get through the crowd to the siren lights that beamed
ahead, I couldn’t see a thing but I had seen Tola’s car afar off. “Tola!” I
shouted as I pushed. “Out of my way!” I screamed.
I
pushed myself through the last line and jumped out of the crowd – I almost
stumbled as I saw a security man. “What’s going on? Where’s Tola?”
He
panted. “She was just taken down that way”, he pointed. “The last hospital
before the creek.”
I
took a deep breath and turned left as directed. It was so dark and annoyingly
sandy on the road which actually led to the creek. I walked as fast as I could
in the dark as different thoughts ran through my mind. I saw a red light
blinking ahead and quickly hurried on towards it. They became two, they blinked
simultaneously. I gasped and smiled. My luck! Something or someone would direct
me to the hospital. I smiled to myself but something made me stop dead in my
tracks; there were many red lights now and they weren’t blinking simultaneously
as before, but in a beautiful sequence, almost as if they were being set there
on purpose. I shook the thought from my head. “Who would want to do such a
thing in a place like this?” I walked on slowly and approached the beautiful
red buds of lights. They were tiny but beautiful. I tried to look around in the
now semi-red-dark environment and couldn’t really make out anything out.
I
advanced and immediately stepped back as the sand started to glow. “What’s
going on?” I said. The glow turned into letterings that came out one after the
other. I blinked as I read:
KIMBERLY, WILL YOU MARRY ME?
I gasped as I read it again. I
looked up and saw David before me on one knee as he lifted a red tiffany box
with a diamond ring in it. “Kim, please would you marry me?” he asked with an
eyebrow raised.
I smiled as I bit my lips. Cold
chills ran through my body and I could feel goose bumps all over my body, the
cool sea breeze also contributed to it, but it was more because of this special
moment. He blinked nervously as he stared at me with a smile. I looked up to
the heavens and thanked God and then looked down at him. “Yes.” I said softly.
“Yes? Is that a yes?”
I nodded excitedly and
screamed. “Yes!!!”
He chuckled as he slipped the
ring onto my finger. “I love you.” he said, softly.
“And I love you.” I replied and smiled as he kissed my
hand.
He rose to his feet and pulled
me closer for a kiss. “Can we stay like this forever?” He asked as he pulled
away for a second to wrap his arms around me.
“I’d love to.” I replied. “Except that I am in my
bathrobe.”
“I like
you in your bathrobe.” He replied and kissed my forehead.
I scoffed. “Where are those
losers?”
“I don’t know what you are talking
about.” He replied.
“Tola and Ini? Car accident?”
He
giggled. “Oh well…you fell for it, didn’t you?” he asked as he whisked me up
into his arms. “Dear future wife, I won’t be able to carry you like this when
you are all preggy.”
“Really?” I scoffed. “It’s for
better or worse, David, I’ll advise you to go gain a few more pounds.”
He
smiled and stopped right in front of the lake. He dropped me kindly on the
cloth he must have spread there earlier and took his seat beside me. He fetched
a bottle of wine and two glasses from a picnic bag and filled my glass first.
“Here you go.”
“Thank you.” I said, collecting the
glass. I sipped carefully and placed my head on his shoulder.
“Are you really going to marry me,
Kimberly?” he asked.
I
rolled my eyes with a smile. “Unh uh…”
“Oh God…I am so blessed.” He said
and slid down slowly so that I’d rest my head on his chest. “We’ll be here
together.”
I
nodded. “Of course…except that you have clothes, and I don’t.” I grinned.
“You have me.” he replied with a
smile.
I
stared at him with a smile. “Really?” I asked teasingly.
He
blinked with a smile. “Yeah…now…and forever.”
We
kissed.
**
3
weeks after…
Mirabel
pushed the door open. “Henry, if you continue like this, we are really going to
be having troubles.”
“Babe, give me five minutes.”
She
snapped. “I have been giving you five minutes for the past thirty minutes.” She
replied angrily. “You were late for convocation, God knows what else you’ll be
late for.”
“My burial?” he replied with a grin.
She
scoffed ad stared at the mirror. “Henry! I don’t like that tie and you know
it.” She said and walked over to the drawers and pulled out a purple tie. “This
is much better.” She added dangling it before him.
He
grumbled and took off the old tie.
**
and
left for my room. Some of us had to sleep.
**“Ini!
Baby is crying!” Marcus shouted as he adjusted his bow tie. “Ini!!!”
Ini
hurried into the bedroom. “Marcus, she just wants a change of diapers. Can’t
you do that?”
“Me? No way! You do it?”
She
scoffed. “Why?” she asked as she tilted her aside and started to remove the old
diapers. “Thank God your mom is coming over this evening.”
He
nodded. “She should be here soon. She knows we have to go out.” He said as he
adjusted his cufflinks. “Babe, when are you going to move in here with me permanently?”
She eyeballed
him. “Are we married?”
“Bu…but, I’ll propose to you
eventually, do you know how many couples live together without getting
married?”
She
nodded. “Not interested.” She said as she finished with the baby’s diapers.
“Let’s hurry or we’ll be late.”
“You are the busy one. I am ready.”
He replied with a grin as he adjusted his collar.
**
“Thank you, Tola.” I said as she
helped me with my necklace. “The guys should be here soon.” I said, staring at
the clock.
She
nodded as she applied her lip gloss. “I hope this gown isn’t too short for the
ceremony.”
I
stared at her. “It’s perfect.”
She
nodded. “Ini should be coming in tomorrow, right?”
“I think so. We need to plan the
take off quickly.”
She
nodded with a sad face. “I’ll miss this place.”
“Me too…but I will gladly swap it
for David’s arm in the cold.”
She
sneered. “Na so… Let’s wait and see.”
I
hissed and picked up my phone and we started taking pictures while we waited
for the guys.
**
David
held my hand as we walked into Liz Art
Gallery. I smiled as Oyinkan approached us. “Hi guys!!!” she said with a
smile and pecked me. “You guys look so cute together.”
“Thanks, couz.” David replied. “What
about Ben?”
She
raised an eyebrow. “Ben? How would I know?”
“Ta-da!!!” Ben said as he slid
behind us. “Oyinkan, I have been looking for you since like forever.”
“Later guys.” She said and excused
herself.
Ben
smiled at us. “Gotta go.” He said and followed her.
“David, let’s go see the paintings
on the other side.” I said, pulling him along.
**
Elizabeth
welcomed some intending customers as she walked along with them.
“Elizabeth!”, someone shouted.
She
turned to see Niran and his wife, Olamide. “Hello…” she said coolly and hugged
Olamide Briggs. “How are you, Olamide?”
Olamide
smiled. “It’s been a while, It’s so nice to see you.”
Niran
stretched out his hand out for a handshake and Elizabeth took it coolly.
“Fantastic gallery you have here.”
“Thank you.” she replied.
He
nodded. “We’ll be looking around.” He said as he walked ahead with Olamide.
**
“I like this painting.” I said as I
touched a painting. “It’s so lovely, it says so much about love.”
He
pulled me slightly into his grip. “Don’t I say all about love?” he asked with a
smile.
I
shook my head smiling. “NO…I love the painting.”
“Oh then…you are gonna be getting
married to me.” he said as he planted a kiss on my mouth.
I
giggled softly. “David…”
“Yea…”
I
adjusted his tie. “I’ll marry the painting.”
He
giggled. “I see… In that case, I’ll buy the painting, put it in my room, and
that’s where you’ll be.” He replied.
I
smiled. “Am I lucky to be marrying you?”
“No. You are blessed.”
I
nodded and rolled his tie playfully.
The
bright lights went off and were replaced by dim emergency lights.
“Everyone please come to the
centre!!!” Security beckoned through the voice over.
David
pulled my hand and we walked back to the centre. Tola and Wole joined us.
“What’s going on?” Wole asked.
“I don’t know.” I replied as I held
David’s hand.
Ini
hurried to join us. “Do you think there’s a problem?” she asked. “Maybe David’s
father came here to haunt us?”
We
all hissed as we stared around thinking of the possibility. Ini gasped.
“Where’s Marcus?”
The
lights came on immediately and Marcus was standing on the podium with a
microphone in his hand. “What is that idiot doing there?” Ini asked.
Marcus
cleared his throat. “Hello everyone! Sorry for that hitch, but, I need to have
all your attention. I am in love with the best woman on this earth.” The ‘Awww’
floated. “She is over there. She is Ini Obong.” The lights beamed on Ini. She
smiled lightly and then eyed Marcus. “Ini…” he started as he walked towards
her. “Ini, I love you so much, you are my life.” He said. He then got down on
one knee and raised a ring box before her. “Please marry me.”
She
gasped.
**
“That was some proposal by Marcus.”
I said as I closed the door after Tola and Ini.
“YES!!!!!!!!!!” She screamed and
jumped into the sofa. “I join the league of soon to be married women!
Yaaaaaayyyyyyyy” she shouted as she stared at her ring. “This is so beautiful.”
Tola
jabbed me lightly and I knew she was about to say something offensive or funny.
“How much did you buy the ring, Ini?”
Ini
frowned. “What do you mean, Tola?”
“Just saying.”Tola replied with a
grin.
I
giggled. “Congratulations, sweetheart.” I said as I took my seat on the sofa.
Tola and Ini joined me. “We are so blessed, right?”
“Of course…I have got the best man
in Marcus.” Ini replied. “He even staged a show. “I should have said no.” she
replied, giggling.
I
smiled as I wrapped my hand around them. “It’s time to plan the yard sale for
this place.”
Tola
nodded. “I’ll miss my bedroom.” She said as she wiped a fake tear from her
face.
“I’ll miss the kitchen.” Ini said.
Tola
and I hissed. “Like you ever cooked.” I replied.
“It’s not like I have a choice
anymore, I have a baby to cater to.”
I
nodded. “Yes, and a chef for a husband. Marcus is a genius in the kitchen, you
shouldn’t be bothered.”
“I think we should call the boys to help us
with the yard sale.” Tola suggested. “And our kid brother too.”
Ini
yawned. “Henry, right? He was all over Mirabel, is he dating Wole’s sister?”
“LASTMA,
yes.”Tola replied. She then swerved in my direction. “And Ben Ten likes
Oyinkan, unh?”
I
nodded with a smile. “Seems so.”
Ini
hissed. “See this thief o! Do you want to keep Ben as a spare?”
“I haven’t said anything like that.”
I replied.
Ini
sighed. “You don’t have to, now, in other important news, I would move in with
Marcus after the yard sale.”
“When did you decide that?” Tola
asked.
She
shrugged. “What’s left?”
“The wedding, durr!”Tola replied.
She
scoffed. “Tell me you are not itching to move in with Wole.”
“There will be time for all what you
are thinking later.” Tola replied.
Ini
stuck her tongue out. “Whatever.”
I
left them to their banter.
**
2 months gone…
“Oga,
you get visitor.” The warder said and opened Tunji’s cell.
Tunji
stretched his muscles and slipped into his slippers and followed the warder. He
dragged his leg painfully after the officer. He had been welcome to the Maximum
security prison in grand style by his cellmates’ months ago, even though they
were all friendly now, the scars wouldn’t leave.
“Oga Tunji!!!” Some inmates hailed
as he walked by.
He
waved back as he walked on after the warder.
“Ten minutes.” The warder said and
walked away.
Tunji
took his seat before his lawyer. “How are you holding up, sir?”
“I am healthy. I have a class with
some inmates by 3pm, so make it fast. Any update on Bolu?”
The
Lawyer nodded. “Yes, the judge has said that he is sentenced to life
imprisonment on recovery.”
“If he recovers…” Tunji added.
The
Lawyer nodded. “The chances of his recovery are however slim. “The Doctors say
he has a severe case of insanity and are not sure if he would ever be sane
again.”
Tunji
took a deep breath and looked up. “Thank you Lord.”
The
Lawyer stared at him. “Why are you thanking God?”
“He kept me sane.” He replied with a
bleak smile. “How is Kimberly?”
The
Lawyer smiled. “She would be getting married next weekend.”
Tunji’s
face fell. “I won’t even see my daughter marry. I deserve it anyway.”
“Don’t be so sure.” The Lawyer
replied.
Tunji
stared at him. “What do you mean?”
**
I
pushed the door open slightly and stared at Dad. “Hi…” I said as I waved. David
walked in after me. The Lawyer stared at Dad with a smile.
Dad
blinked pitifully. “How are you?”
I
ran to him and hugged him. “Daddy…”
“My girl…I am so proud of you.” he
said as he stroked my hair. He then kissed my forehead. “I am so happy for
you.”
David
stepped forward and bowed. “Good day sir.”
Dad
took a deep breath. “David, I am sorry about your father.”
David
smiled faintly. “You shouldn’t be. He’s getting what he deserves.”
Dad
nodded and stared in my direction. “Congratulations to you…” he paused and
stared at David. “You too, son.”
David
nodded and handed the Invitation Card to Dad with a bow. “Sir, you are invited
to our wedding.” Dad gasped as he collected the Invitation Card. A tear drop
rolled down his eyes.
“Dad, would you also walk me down
the aisle?” I asked as the lawyer brought out Dad’s permit with a smile.
Dad
bowed his head. “This is too much for me.” he said as he wiped his face. “Do I
deserve this?”
I
smiled and hugged him. “You are my Dad, now and forever…”
**
ASYLUM:
MENTAL
STATE
“Left! Left! Left! Right! Right! Right! Forward March!
One-Two” Bolu chanted as he led the other patients round the block. “Tunji,
lead the other men! Oya!!!” The patient moved haphazardly after Bolu as he led
them round the blocks.
Dr. Obinna shook his head pitifully. “He gets along with
the others pretty fast, doesn’t he?”
“For a while.”
Dr. Obinna stared at his colleague. “What do you mean?”
“Watch and see.”
Bolu jumped up and crashed on the floor. The other
patients surrounded him and started to hit him violently.
“Ah…Cane!!! Cane them all.” Dr. Obinna shouted
as the other Doctors rushed towards all the patients lashing them hard till
they released Bolu who sprawled in his own blood.
Bolu
laughed painfully as he wiped some tears from his face. He took some of the
blood and rubbed his forehead with it. “Am I a fine boy?” he asked laughing.
“Get my suit, Get my tie! I am late for work. David mustn’t resume there! Oya!
oya!! oya!!! Hurry up you loafers.”
Dr.
Obinna shook his head sadly. “Tie him up.”
“Sir, he gets worse when we tie him
up.”
“Really?”
“Yes sir…he starts fighting hard and
almost breaks the binds.”
Dr.
Obinna nodded. “Increase his strokes, then sedate him. I know he doesn’t
respond to the double doses anymore, make it triple, add anything that would
instill more pain, let’s see where we get with this.”
His
colleague nodded and beckoned for support as they approached Bolu who smiled at
them. “Hey…Calm down, Calm down…”
**
“Oyinkan, thank you so much for
everything, my marriage has improved over the last months.”
Oyinkan
smiled. “You are welcome, Mrs. Madu. All you have to do now is make things
better for the family, spend more time with your husband and kids than with
your friends, they are single and can’t really offer you the best advice.”
Mrs.
Madu nodded. “Thank you so much.” She replied as she slipped a cheque on the
table. “Thank you so much.”
“Oh…you have to pay to the attendant
outside.” Oyinkan replied
Mrs.
Madu smiled. “I have done that, this is an extra showing how grateful I am.”
Oyinkan
smiled. ‘Thanks a lot, I am really grateful.”
Mrs.
Madu nodded and walked out. Ben walked in almost immediately with a bouquet of
flowers. “Happy Anniversary, Baby.”
She
smiled as she collected the flowers from him. “Happy Anniversary.” She replied
as they kissed. “They are beautiful, thank you, Ben.” She said as she placed
them carefully on her table. “I got a tip today.” She said, flaunting the
cheque.
He
smiled. “Nice, when don’t you ever get a tip? People love your job.”
“You never pay for your sessions.”
She replied.
He
nodded. “I am having them with you, why should I pay?”
“Encourage my job, pay me.”
He
smiled. “I’ll do that in due season.”
She
nodded. “We’ll see, how’s Millaroca?”
“Well…Editor-in-Chief is doing fine.”
She
gasped with a smile. “What? You got a promotion.”
He
nodded with a smile. “Yep! That’s me, baby.”
“Congratulations.” She replied as
she walked over to him. She sat on the table with her legs crossed. “So, do we
drink to that?”
He
nodded with a sensual smile. “Most definitely.”
**
“Henry, what do you think about my
fashion house?”
Henry
dropped his game pad. “I think it is a fantastic idea, you are too arrogant to
work for anyone.”
Mirabel
winked. “I’ll take that as a compliment.” She replied and sat beside him.
“Henry, are you not nervous about work? You are gonna be teaching kids.” She
grinned.
He
scoffed. “It’s not so bad you know.” He blinked. “And it’s just for a year, and
then the Youth service would be over.”
She
nodded. “Anyway, I have to be on my way, don’t come late for the yard sale
tomorrow.”
“Of course not, I am helping out.
I’ll walk you home.”
She
smiled. “Thank you.”
**
I
adjusted the video camera in our almost empty living room. I rubbed my hand
against my jeans as I stared at our house…well, almost not anymore, the yard sale
was due in the next thirty minutes, but pending the time, we could use some
moments alone.
Tola
walked in with Ini. “Ready?” she asked.
I
nodded. “The guys are outside?”
Ini
smiled. “Making friends.”
**
Marcus
jumped on the sofa. “I should buy this sofa.”
Wole
stared at him. “You wan die?” he
asked in pidgin English.
David
smiled. “Ini would have your head.”
“That babe is a handful but I love
her anyway.”
Henry
scoffed. “We all love her.”
Marcus
eyeballed him. “Who asked for your opinion, son?”
Henry
popped his collar. “Easy guys, you need me else none of my sisters would be
with any of you.”
“Really?” David asked.
Henry
nodded and stared to whistle with a smile.
**
“My name is Ini Obong.” Ini started.
Tola and I giggled. She then swung at us. “Stop it.” Tola and I stopped
giggling but we managed to pull faces at her. “Okay, whatever…I am Ini. Model,
hottest of the three, when you see the other two, you’ll understand. However I
am a mother too early, my baby is a beautiful girl, I hope I can be a great
mother too. Oh well…I am not gonna be a model anymore, maybe in the next two years,
I need to take care of my baby.” She paused and smiled. “Marcus is the man I am
gonna marry, my ever invisible best friend turned out to be the love of my
life.” She said and paused to blink. I smiled and Tola gave the ‘Awww’…we then
giggled. “My own life lesson, never thought I would be a wife, not to talk of a
mother, never saw myself as the perfect fit for anyone, but today, I can say I
am on my way to being that woman you want.” She said with a huge smile. “Or
not.” She concluded.
Ini
smiled as she came to us. “That’s mine. Tola, you are next!”
“Me? Why not Kimberly?”Tola asked.
Ini
scoffed. “Oh come on, you are next and that’s that. Why does everything have to
be a big deal with you?”
Tola
rolled her eyes and took her seat before the camera. “My name is Tola Matthews,
I work in Real Estate, and contrary to Ini’s opinion of her having the nicest
body among the three of us, I say no. you see…I actually have Omotola Jalade’s
shape, yes, seriously, well not exactly…but almost, just a little more
work…work in progress.” Ini and I giggled. She flipped her hair over shoulder
and continued. “My life has not been really perfect, and my biggest
imperfection was holding on to nothing.” She said and took a deep breath. “A
reserved apology to Tolu’s future wife if he ever gets married, but, Tolu was
my biggest mistake, sometimes we have to always let go and let the right man
in. By the way, the next time you slash my car tyre Wole, you are getting me
the latest ride in town…Ahan! What kind of man are you? Na to dey slash tyre you sabi and bring toothpaste and toothbrush as
Breakfast in bed for person! Anyway, I love you with my life, not like I
have a choice; you are my life, Wole.” She said with a smile. “Wole gave me a
reason to smile, a reason to live and a reason to love, he became the reason
and that’s why life won’t be life without you, Wole.” She said and took a deep
breath. “Life lesson?” she asked and stared at Ini. “Why did you even say that
nonsense?”She asked. Ini shrugged. Tola swirled back before the camera. “Okay,
Life lesson, if you have a Tolu Scott in your life, please throw him out, no
lady deserves such a man. Gracias!”
Tola
curtsied as she approached us. “Madam, it’s your turn.” She said staring at me.
I
took a deep breath. “I already recorded mine.”
“What?!” they shouted and pounced on
me.
I
screamed out.
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Dear
Future Husband,
I am just a young girl with life,
love and more love for you.
I was already married to you before I
met you. (Our Fathers’ wish) but, looking back at their decision, I am glad
they brought us together. David, I
could never imagine my life with anyone else but you. I met Ben, but, (smiles)
he wasn’t it. I just knew it. I knew I would wait, I would wait for you.
I was afraid of you. I was scared of
being David Coker’s wife, but I knew I didn’t have any choice then, but now, I
would be scared and afraid if I was not your wife…well almost. The thought of
being a mother terrifies me right now, but, I bet we would make terrific
parents. I am optimistic.
David, I hope we don’t have to face
storms in our marriage but even if we do, we’ll come through it all together, I
hope we don’t have to fight. (Deep breath) Who am I kidding? These things
happen…sometimes or always, but I hope that in every argument I find love in
your eyes, in every pain or anger I can still feel our love so strong. (Smiles)
I hope in every of fear we find strength to go through it all.
Mom swears that she is through with
Dad, he is really sorry, but what can I say? I hope she could one day forgive
him. Maybe you could talk to her on his behalf?
I hope we raise the finest kids.
Kids who will fear the Lord and that would be proud of us and we would be proud
of them also. (Wide grin) I hope we have a girl first. What would I call her?
Hmmm….we’ll think about that later. But I’ll call our son George, I absolutely
love that name. (Blows kiss)
David, I hope and pray that I never
lose you, not to death, and even when we would die, we would be old, rusty and
still and love. We would have our graves next to each other and who knows, God
might just have our mansions close to each other in Heaven. I don’t know how it
is over there, but I can’t wait to see you there too.
David, you have my heart as your
home, your haven. I am not going to leave your side; I’ll be a sister, friend,
wife, mother and lover. I am yours.
David, my love, I pray God blesses
us and we forever stay in love.
David, I’ll love you with everything
I have and everything I am, now…and forever. (Smiles)
I am Kimberly Bankole, your future
wife.
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Thanks for reading #DearFutureHusband.
It’s been amazing!
Now
and forever, I love you all,
Tomi
Adesina.
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So i really enjoyed dfH, it was d bomb...iv been openin ur blog since to see if u had put the story up, and i reaLly loved kims recording...thumbs up tomi
ReplyDeleteHell yea! I so much luv all d cast of dis series(except bolu coker) nd i luv d awesome proposals.tomi ur a genius! Nd trust me ur gona go places.luv u lik so much*mwaah* nd in one word.DFH ROCKS!!!! Kinda havin a crush on david,wole nd marcus already*winks*lol waitin 4 dah new series,.,
ReplyDelete4rm d bottom of my heart I say, 'THANK YOU'. I really enjoyed every bit of DFH, can't wait 4 d nxt series.
ReplyDeleteAwwww....... #sobs. My Dear Future husband must read this episode brcause the proposal must be #gangan. Thank you darling Tomi. God bless you for me
ReplyDeleteThank you Tomi for letting us have a glimpse into your wonderful mind. You are blessed
ReplyDeleteGood one as usual. Thanks Tomi for opening your good heart to share this episodes.
ReplyDeleteI pray for you to get your own complete future huzby at the right time IJN
Thank you Tomi for letting us have a glimpse into your wonderful mind. You are blessed
ReplyDelete*dancing* me like it, me like it, me like it, dear future husband. . . Kudos to u slav (y) keep it up *kisses*
ReplyDeleteIts so amazing..i love it.thank u tomi..u re' the best.
ReplyDeleteNice story from a great writer, kudos, I don't know you bt I'm proud of you.
ReplyDeleteGod bless u Tomi, so nice a write up.muahh
ReplyDeleteWowwwwww.................that was a real masterpiece and a beautiful ending ti the series. Thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteU r da bomb Tomi,more greese 2 ur elbow.dis write is d best...
ReplyDeleteAwwwww!!! Very beautiful series.. DFH made my thursdays better.. We love u too Tomi..
ReplyDeleteThanks so much tomi, such a beautiful story from a beautiful mind.....i enjoyed every word, sentence, paragraph and episode. Do keep it up
ReplyDeleteAwwww my darln Tomi. This is just too beautiful. I really enjoyed Dear Future Husband, awww kim and david, tola and wole, ini and marcus, mirabel and henry, ben10 and oyinkan, lovely write up babe. Pls put it mind that the new series will be twice per week o. Thank you and God bless you. Sept 18 is too far sha.
ReplyDeleteGod bless u Tomi for giving me hope, however little, its a scary world out here and that's why God sent angels like you & @TundeLeye to give us something to hold on to -hope, a dream that someday, my own DFH will come and it'll be all worth it. I love you and I know the sky is your starting point!!!! #PROUD#
ReplyDeletesigh ... can't believe it's over! can't wait for the 18th ;)
ReplyDeleteThis is a great worK...DFH is wonderful....kudos to you tomi..
ReplyDeleteTomi God Bless U....U r a very talented writer, just keep it up dear....beautiful work!!!!!!!!! I enjoyed it all d way!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletenice....a beautiful write up...#thumbsup# cant wait for the next series
ReplyDeleteTis was a great series!!! As a writer the best i could wish you is a very and always fertile mind. Stay blessed :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the story ends. Sadly. This was a tale I wanted to go on without and end but hey, what can I do. Nice job. May u never experience writer's block. Looking forward to Broken Or Not
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story Tomi. Twas breathtaking....
ReplyDeleteThank you, Tomi. I love the series. Looking forward to the new one. Gracias
ReplyDeleteFantastic work!!! U r really doin grt,mre grs 2ur elbow
ReplyDeleteWoooooow,v neva commented b4....enjoyed every bit ov it,can't wait 4 d next one..thanks tomi...God b wiv u!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for this great piece.
ReplyDeleteMaking Christ the bedrock of a home is the best and perfect thing to do and that you have shown us in this piece.
Am definitely in love with writers
Tomi your d best gal...more vaseline 2 ur elbow...my future husband has 2 read dis..cos my proposal has 2 be gangster#bigsmile#waiting 4 ur next series..god bless u real good Tomi
ReplyDeleteThANKS FOR GIVING THE WORLD THIS STORY. MY FUTURE HUSBAND BETTER BE READING THE SERIES.LOL. YOU MAKE THE ART OF STORYTELLING LOOK SO EASY AND YOUR CHARACTERS ARE JUST TOO REAL. WAITING FOR THE NEXT INTERESTING SERIES
ReplyDeleteIts good to know we have such talent in dis country. Keep it up girl. U will go places at this pace. Kudos more youngsters should be encouraged to display their talent like this
ReplyDeleteWow! Been a great read as usual. I love the finale. Thumbs up to my kiddo sis @Iam_Tomi. You rock, girl.
ReplyDeleteNice 1 sis about to get started on mine 2 uve been a huge encouragement and motivation 2 me
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story tomi. I enjoyed every bit of the story. God bless you
ReplyDeleteGreat one as usual Tomi Dearie, my future husby must read DS , d proposals,recording nd all ws d bomb
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwww...amazing story..spent the whole night reading from the very first episode..I think I'll sleep now...
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