EPISODE 24
Elizabeth smiled slightly. “I
am sorry; I don’t know who you are.”
David swallowed. “Of
course you do, don’t deny it.”
She blinked. “You
are harassing me, kid.”
He dropped to his knees. “I
am sorry, mom.” He cried
She laughed sarcastically. “I
don’t have a son, he died.”
“No
Mom, he didn’t. He’s right here; it’s me, David.”
He paused to catch his breath. “David Sunflower, your son.”
She scoffed. “Young
man, you are getting me really upset. Please, don’t make me call security.”
He shook his head. “You
may call them; I just want you to know I am sorry.”
“I
am not your mother, please get out.” She whispered as she shook her head
unable to believe what was going on. “You are not my son, you are a liar.”
He held her hand. “Mom,
I am David, stop this, mom.”
“You
are David Coker!” she yelled. “Now get out!” she shouted
as she pressed the emergency bell near her bed.
**
Tola took a large gulp directly from the vodka
bottle. Ini laughed hard as she sipped gently from her own glass. “You
were sober…”
“Up
until this moment!” Tola retorted. “Ini, you are
the devil! I can’t believe you would go that far just to hurt Shola.”
Ini shrugged. “That
devil would have done the same to me if she had had the opportunity.”
She replied and took a deep breath. “Although, I must say I regret it now.”
“You
should!” She stressed as she took a deep breath. “Shola
is good. She cut a serious deal.”
Ini smiled. “Her tenure is
over.”
“What
are you planning?” Tola asked as she poured herself another glass. “You
always have a plan B, you are too evil not to.”
Ini smiled faintly. “Of
course, I have a plan. I have turned myself in to the police! My jackpot! That
idiot is not aware and so I am going to force her to file a report and then
make her withdraw it when I let her know that I have turned her in for
blackmail”
“What?!
Ini…” Tola started.
She scoffed. “Tola,
you really need to be smart in life. Our people say when you are in the sea if you can’t eat the whale get ready not to be eaten by it, be fast.”
Tola hissed. “Does
that even exist?”
She nodded with a grin. “I
just coined it, and so, it does.”
“Rubbish.
I don’t like what I am hearing. You have gone too far, Ini.”
She sighed. “Too far to
look back now!” she replied as she drew closer to Tola. “The
truth is I am really sorry about what I did to Shola, but she is paying evil
for evil.”
“What
did you expect? You staked her career. An eye for an eye!”
Ini sneered. “Is
what you go to learn at church?”
“Don’t
even go there.” Tola replied moving away from her gently. “What
if Shola doesn’t file a report?”
Ini smiled. “She will! Don’t
be a pessimist. Henry is putting ideas in her head on my behalf.”
“Her
cousin?”
“Yes, he is helping me nab her! I am
expecting her to do that tomorrow. She is already upbeat about who filed in the
anonymous report, so I guess she would want to topple it as soon as possible.”
“Have
you thought of the possibility that she would play the victim and not turn
herself in?”
Ini scoffed. “She
won’t! I know that fool, she won’t, and I am putting all my cards on it.”
**
Tunji Bankole’s
driver pulled up in front of a warehouse. “We are here, sir.” He announced.
Tunji pulled his sleeves up
slightly to check the time. “Are you sure?”
He nodded. “There he
comes.”
They watched as Femi approached
from the warehouse twisting and turning right and left, he knocked kindly on
the glass as soon as he got to the car.
Tunji pushed the door open. “Thank
you for meeting me.”
“Yes
sir! But sir, why am I doing this? My life, my job, my family, they are all at
stake here.”
Tunji took a deep breath. “Femi,
I know you have worked for Mr. Coker for a long time and you are loyal to him,
but sometimes, we don’t need to do things wrongly.”
“What’s
your point, sir? I have kept Chief Bello alive and lied to my employer risking
my own life, what’s in it for me?”
Tunji brought out an envelope. “That’s
enough money for you to run away and start your life in any country or city of
your choice, get away before Mr. Coker finds you.”
Femi nodded. “Bbbbut
sssir…Why are you doing this to your friend?” he stammered
“That’s
none of your business! Where is Chief Bello?”
Femi took a deep breath. “He
is in my house.”
“Get
him out of there as soon as possible, and let me know when you do.”
Femi nodded and without another
word stepped out of the car.
**
The nurses tried to keep David back.
“Please
leave, sir.”
Wole held him. “It’s
okay, man.”
“I
don’t know you! You are not my son! You are Bolu’s
son!” Elizabeth yelled furiously.
David fought hard to get away. “Mom,
I am sorry. I am sorry.”
“Go
away, David! I don’t want to see you. I don’t
ever want to see you! Leave.”
The nurse stepped up to her. “Please
calm down, ma. We don’t want you to get yourself worked up.”
“Get
that man out of here.” She ordered.
The Nurse nodded and turned to
David. “Please leave.”
David stared at her. “I
just want to talk to you, Mom. Please…” Elizabeth turned her face away. Heat
flushed across David’s face as his tears rolled down his
cheek.
Wole pulled him out. “Come
on, David.”
David swallowed. “Wole,
she will never forgive me.”
“We
would keep trying. She must forgive you.” he replied, as he walked with David to
the car.
**
Ini hurried to the door in her
bathrobe. She took a peek through the keyhole. “Oh my…” she muttered as she opened the door. “Good
morning, sirs.”
“Good
morning. We are from the Police station.”
She nodded. “Clearly.”
“We
have a warrant for Ms. Obong to be interrogated.”
She nodded. “That’s
me, let me see it.” She replied, collecting the document.
She breezed through it to confirm Shola’s name in it. “Okay, give me fifteen minutes.” She said, and shut them out.
**
Shola smiled as Ini took her seat. “Justice
always prevails my dear.”
“I
know.” Ini replied.
Mr. Itama walked in and signaled to
the standing officers to be dismissed. “I have read your statement, Ms. Jones.”
He started. Shola nodded with a smile. “We have decided to file a report back to
your agency and we would check with the security unit for evidences.”
Shola scoffed. “I
have the evidence here.” She said dropping a CD on the table.
“How
did you come across this kind of information?” he asked, raising the CD before her.
She smiled. “I simply helped
the Police do their job.”
He nodded and turned towards Ini. “Ms.
Obong, I have also read your statement and we would try to reconcile yours with
hers.”
“I
have some evidences here.” She replied, bringing out a file from
her bag.
Shola slammed the table. “What
evidence could that be?”
Mr. Itama stared at her. “Ms.
Obong here also reported a crime from your end. Are you not aware?”
“Not
at all. They are all lies, cheap lies.”
He nodded. “We would see
you both in due time once we have processed your information.”
“What
are you doing, Ini?” Shola asked.
Ini smiled. “Nothing.”
Mr. Itama cleared his throat. “On
a lighter note, you both are public figures, are you both ready for this?”
Ini nodded. “Yes, we are.”
“Speak
for yourself. What do you mean, Sir?”
He put Ini’s file into
his drawer. “You both have filed reports against one another, I am not even
a judge but I can promise you both that you are both guilty.”
Shola slammed the table. “Impossible!
I was the victim.”
“You
blackmailed me.” Ini replied with a smile.
Shola stared at Mr. Itama. “Sir?”
He nodded with a wry smile. “I
am in a very nice mood and I would be willing to help you both resolve this
matter as long as you both are prepared to let go.”
Shola swallowed. “Are
you saying that I could go to jail for that?”
“Exactly.
You both are on the wrong side of the law.”
Shola’s face fell. “Not fair.”
He nodded. “I understand
how you feel, but, Ms. Jones, you are in luck that I am not willing not to send
you both to court without a warning, what would it be for you both?”
“What
choice do we have?” Ini asked.
He smiled. “There is only
one, both of you would close your cases here and as a law enforcement officer,
I would melt the punishment which I am liable to give to you.”
Shola took a deep breath. “What
sort of punishment?”
He fetched his handbook. “We
could regard this as a mild case of public nuisance and since you both have a
history of that, you each get 2 hours of community service for a week.”
“Fair
enough.” Shola replied.
Ini shook her head in disagreement.
“I
want to go to court.”
Mr. Itama took a deep breath. “Are
you sure?”
Shola stared at her. “Please
give us a moment to talk alone outside.” She replied, dragging Ini out.
**
I stared out of the black Limousine
as it pulled up in front of one of our companies in Abuja.
“You
are going to love it here.” Mom said as she stepped out to the
teeming press who were expecting the arrival of Prof. (Mrs.) Bankole.
I took a deep breath as I stepped
out. I waved with a smile, Mark had told me to expect an ambush.
“Ms. Kimberly
Bankole, how are the preparations for your wedding coming along?” “Kim Banks,
you have pushed Millaroca back up, are you going to abandon her now?” “Ms.
Bankole, are you taking over your father’s company here in Abuja?” The
questions kept pouring in. Is this what
Genevieve Nnaji and co. go through? I thought.
“Schedule
an appointment for an interview with her.” Mark said, telling the press off.
I took a deep breath as I got into
the elevator. “What was that all about?” I asked.
Mark smiled. “Last
night, I sent in word that you were in Abuja, I am hoping you won’t
be ambushed later on.”
Mom nodded. “Good job,
Mark. Impressions need to be made.”
I scoffed. “Mom, I am not
cut out for all of this.”
“It’s
okay dear, we would help you out.” She replied as we stepped out onto the
first floor. “Kimberly, we would be meeting the members of staff later on
after lunch, but I want you to prepare yourself for work here.”
I stopped and stared at her. “Mom,
I am not here to work. You know I want Millaroca.”
Mark nudged me ahead kindly. “Yes,
we know.”
“Mom,
what is this?”
She smiled. “Do you want to
remain at home bored? This is just to take you away from boredom. Now let’s
go, people are staring.”
I nodded as I walked on with them.
**
Bolu Coker stared at David as he
walked in. “Have you forgotten about your suspension?”
“I
haven’t forgotten. I just want to know why I am getting married in
two weeks. Do you need Kim’s inheritance so badly?”
He nodded. “Yes I do, I
know money means nothing to you, you have made a lot for yourself, but I want
my right soon. I am broke.”
“Father,
have you no shame?”
He smiled. “Why? It was an
agreement. I am proud. I want it soon and I want it now.”
David took a deep breath as he
loosened his tie. “When last did you check on my mother?”
Bolu hissed. “She
must be dead.”
“My
mom is not dead.”
He smiled. “Good for her.
What’s this all about?”
“I
saw my mother yesterday.” He said as a tear drop rolled down his
cheek. “My mom doesn’t want me again.”
Bolu blinked as he sat up straight.
“Where
did you see her?”
David scoffed. “Why?!
So you can finish off what you started? He shook his head stubbornly. “No,
I won’t tell you.”
“Then
why are you here?”
David took a deep breath. “I
am here to let you know that I am no longer getting married to Kimberly…”
he said. Bolu’s jaw dropped. “Not on your terms, father.”
“What
do you mean? I don’t care what you do and how you do it, we
already have an agreement which you would sign at the registry and that’s
final.”
David smiled. “Things
change. This…has changed.”
Bolu scoffed. “You
can’t do that.”
“Dad,
I love Kimberly and I refuse to lose her to a selfish old man like you.”
Bolu slammed the table. “You
don’t have a choice! That paper is valid as long as two people are
in agreement, I have her father.”
David nodded. “Not
for long…” he replied and approached the door. “Dad, remember
my mom is alive, so don’t get too comfortable.”
“Is
that a threat, David? Elizabeth is a vegetable.”
David turned towards him. “It’s
funny how the weakest could hurt us, right? I heard Prof. Mrs. Bankole ruined
your take over.”
Bolu charged towards him and held
him by the collar. “What are you driving at?”
David smiled. “You
are sitting on my mom’s fortune, it would soon be pretty
uncomfortable.”
“Be
very careful young man, you know what I am capable of.” He retorted.
David dropped his father’s
hands. “Don’t ever touch me like that again.”
“I
made you, David.”
He scoffed. “I am not proud
of it.” He replied and walked out.
**
Henry took off his sunshades as
soon as he came out of the sports centre. His phone rang. “Dear
cousin, what do you want?” he said aloud as he stared at the
caller. The following conversation ensued between them;
Henry:
Hello, Shola!
Shola:
I won’t need your services anymore.
Henry:
Take a chill pill, couz! Why is that?
Shola:
Ini and I have resolved our differences and so any info you have for me is
useless, therefore, no money for you.
Henry shook his head as the line
went dead. A wry smile lurked around his face and he soon started to dance. “We
did it.” He said aloud.
“This
can be regarded as a first grade madness.”
Henry stopped dancing as he stared
at the lady in the Chrysler who had just hurled at him. “Excuse me?”
She took off her shades. “You
shouldn’t be dancing in the streets.”
“FYI,
this is no street, this is a free road, university campus. My dance didn’t
hurt anyone, did it?”
She nodded. “Yes it did.
There is a lady across the road that just dropped dead because of it.”
He raised an eyebrow. “Your
sense of humour is really weak.” He replied as he adjusted his tennis
bag and leaned against her car. “Smooth ride, you are not from around
here, are you?”
“I
think I have a good sense of humour.” She replied with a smile. “That
aside, I need to get to Moremi Hall, could you please help me?”
He smiled as he stared at Moremi
Hall which wasn’t far off. “It is really far, you will have to give
me a ride.” He replied.
She nodded with a smile. “With
all pleasure, thank you.”
He jumped in. “Straight
down.”
She drove on. “So,
is my sense of humour really that weak?”
He scoffed. “That should be
the least of your worries, you are in a car with a guy you don’t
even know.” He flashed a grin at her. “You should be scared.”
She scoffed. “Why?
You are in a car with a lady you don’t know, she just picked you randomly,
she could have picked any other guy.”
He stared at her as he slipped his
hand underneath his shorts. “Really?”
“You
are scared. Cool.” She replied.
He cleared his throat. “Here’s
Moremi.” He lied.
She pulled up. “Don’t
be scared, I am not a serial killer. Thanks for the help.”
He immediately jumped out. “Sorry
boo!” he said with a smile. She raised an eyebrow. “What?
You really are not from around here. Moremi is back where you picked me, just
opposite. This is my destination. Thanks for the ride.”
She took a deep breath. “That’s
not cool, man.”
“I
know! Henry is typically ‘not cool’.” He replied and ran off.
**
Oyinkan dropped the receiver as she
smiled. “Nice to have you here, what’s up?”
“Oyinkan,
I came to get you for lunch.”
She smiled. “Ben, stop
consoling yourself. I can’t be Kim.”
“No,
I am not using you,the thing is Mr. Adeoye just certified pay raise with this
success Millaroca is enjoying.” He replied with a smile. “I
have decided to spend the lunch with you as a way of celebrating.”
She scoffed. “Is
this because Kim is out of town?”
“Just
shut up, okay…I love you!”
She giggled. “You
know movies and pick up lines will do you no good.” She replied
grabbing her bag. “Let’s go eat. I am starving.”
“Are
you running away from me?”
She eyeballed him. “I
have two counseling sessions after lunch, I am starving.” She said as
she walked out.
He smiled and followed briskly.
**
Tola stared at Wole as he tried
convincing a client to take on a house. He had learnt the ropes pretty fast.
She withdrew from the conversation and took her seat staring at them. Wole
never flashed a glance at her as he walked smartly along with the client. She
hoped and prayed that he would at least turn in her direction, but he didn’t.
‘He must have written me off!’ she thought. They even drove in separate
cars to meet up with the client.
Wole ushered the client out of the
building and stepped aside allowing the client to make a phone call. He stared
at Tola from afar. ‘She
was so quick to jump into her car. She must hate me so much. What if she decides
to break up with me? I can’t
let Tola go.’ He
thought.
Tola took a deep breath as Wole
approached her. “The Client is ready for the final negotiation.”
He announced.
“Tie
it up, it is your commission.” She replied.
He wore a faint smile. “I
am still under you, ma’am.”
“Wole…”
she stressed sadly. “I think…”
He cut in. “It’s
okay, I’ll tell him you are unwell, I would tie it up properly.”
He said and walked away.
She wiped a tear drop from her face
as she watched him leave.
**
Oyinkan wiped some mayonnaise from
her mouth. “My first two clients are coming in soon.”
Ben smiled. “So, you would
get paid for psychoanalyzing them?”
“Of
course! But that’s not the motive.”
He nodded, “I see.”
He cleared his throat. “So, what’s your first case about?”
“It
is confidential.” She replied with a smile.“Let’s talk about you, so, did you also get a
promotion?”
He smiled. “I would tell
you if you agree to go out with me.”
“Durr! I am out with you already.”
He scoffed. “Like in a
proper way, on a date perhaps.”
“What
would happen when Kimberly returns?” she asked.
He took a deep breath. “Oyinkan,
I don’t know, but one thing I know is that, I don’t
want to ever lose you.”
“Don’t
worry, I’ll be your friend forever.” She replied with a smile. “We
have to go.” She said, picking her bag as she walked out.
**
“If
I were in your shoes, I would jump at the opportunity of working here.”
I stared at Mark. “That
is exactly why we are different.” I replied with a smile. “Clearly,
you enjoy working with my mom, that’s good for business.”
He smiled. “What do you
know about business? I think you should frequent your mom’s
enterprises.”
“I
never knew she had so much.” I replied, flipping through the pages
of a magazine.
He collected the magazine carefully
and replaced it with a folder. “These are financial records from last
month, you might want to take a look at them.”
“You
have got to be kidding me!” I replied, placing the folder on the
table. “I’m not going through that.”
He smiled. “Why do you
want to return to Lagos so badly?”
I smiled. “Do you have a
family?”
“I
have my little girl in Calabar.” He replied.
I sat up. “I have my life
in Lagos.”
“Your
life?” he asked with a smile. He then paused. “David
Coker, right?”
I nodded with a smile. “Yeah…everything
is not right without him.” I started. “I don’t
know why I am telling you this.”
He smiled as he took his seat. “I
know how you feel, love is crazy.”
“But
David and I are going through some tough times.” I replied. “I am scared.”
He smiled. “You have been
sad since the flight down here, and all through breakfast, Why don’t
you go to him?”
“It’s
complicated.” I replied.
“Love
is a beautiful thing, I only realized how much I loved my wife when she died.”
I took a deep breath. “I
am sorry.”
He smiled. “It’s
fine. I never knew back then, I was too occupied to notice.”
“We
all make mistakes, although it’s really sad that she’s
gone now.”
He nodded. “Yeah…I
wish I could relive those days, anyway, I think you should stop running and
return to Lagos, go back to your love...your life.”
“I
don’t know if it is the right thing to do, I think I hurt him.”
He smiled. “We all make
mistakes. Don’t wait too long to have yours fixed.”
I stared at him with a faint smile.
“What
am I gonna do?”
“I
can get you a ticket to Lagos for tonight.” He said, with a smile. “Might
not be first class.”
My eyes lit up with some hope. “I’ll
take anything.”
**
“I
cannot believe you are still here. Are you stalking me?” Henry asked.
“Why
should I?”
He smiled. “I left you
here, you should have been long gone, you are lucky the bad guys are not here
to hijack this baby.” He said tapping her car’s
bonnet.
“Are
you better than the bad guys? I gave you a ride only for you to turn out to be
a con man.”
He frowned. “That’s
a strong word, lady. I am no con man!”
“I
want you to take me to Moremi Hall.”
He scoffed. “Henry doesn’t
take orders from anyone, my dear.” He replied, with a smile.
She nodded. “Okay, I have
actually been to Moremi and returned, I thought I’d give you a chance to redeem yourself.”
He laughed. “Why?”
“I
am a fan of yours. It’s a shame.” She replied. He raised an eyebrow. “I
read your article on the ‘break
my heart’ thing,
the one you posted online.”
He stared at her. “My
paper! Oh my…”
“Henry
Rodger? It’s okay, wasted journey!” she said as she pushed her weight up
from the car. “Thanks.”
He pulled her hand. “I
am sorry, I am usually very playful.”
“I
see…anyway, I have to leave now.”
“Please…I
really am sorry. To be honest, I didn’t mean to piss you off.”
She scoffed. “Well,
you did.” She said and wriggled from his grip. He hurried to the car. “What
do you want?”
“I
want to make it up to you. I am sorry.”
She nodded. “Now you are
sorry because you know I am disappointed in you, right?”
He nodded. “Yes. I am a jerk,
I know.”
She scoffed. “Impression
has been made, sorry.”
He jumped into the front seat as
she entered. “I am sorry.” He said, with a smile. “And
I think your sense of humour is cool.”
She laughed. “You
are a real jerk.”
“What
can I do?!” he said with a smile.
She smiled back. “I’ll
take the drink.”
He nodded. “Henry Rodgers,
nice to meet you.” he said, stretching out his hand.
“Mirabel
Briggs.” She replied, taking the hand.
**
David watched carefully from a
distance with his binoculars. Mother Francesca waved at Elizabeth as she drove
off in the Victoria’s home pickup truck. He watched as his
mom walked slowly towards the garden. “Now
or never” he said
to himself and jumped out of the bushes.
Elizabeth gasped as she saw him. “What
do you want, young man?”
“Mom…I
just want to talk to you.”
She scoffed. “I
think I haven’t had a bath yet, I might embarrass you.”
He took a deep breath as his voice
broke. “Mom, I am sorry. I regret everything I have done.”
She nodded. “Why are you
looking for me all of a sudden?”
“Mom,
I have been looking for you for a long time now.”
She scoffed. “David,
I don’t want to ever see you again. Please, don’t
ever look for me.” she said, as tears flowed down her eyes. “Go
away from me.”
Tears flowed from his eyes freely. “Mom,
I have lived the last twelve years of my life in regret, please don’t
do this.”
“Are
you saying I am not justified?”
He shook his head in disagreement. “You
have every right to hate me, but I don’t want that to happen.”
“All
those years of rejection from my own son, you meant everything to me, but now,
David…David you are dead to me.”
He dropped on his knees. “Mother,
please.” He said with his head bowed. “Please mother, forgive your son.”
Elizabeth lifted her eyes up to
fight back tears which didn’t stop. “David, you hurt me.”
“I
know, Mom…I am sorry. I just want you to forgive me.”
he pleaded as he held onto her legs. “Please…” he cried.
She stared at him and shook her
head. “It is hard for me to forgive you, I can’t.”
“Mom,
please.” He begged as he prostrated. “I want to be your friend again.”
She knelt down and stroked his hair
tenderly. Her voice broke. “David…I am your biological mother, but I can
never be your friend.” She said, and walked away.
**
Tola waved to her secretary and
hurried to the garage. She started her car and drove off. She played some music
as memories of Wole flooded her thoughts. “If Wole leaves me, it’s
over. Why did he have to come and leave me this way?” she asked
herself. “Wole, I am sorry.” She said, softly.
“Madam!!!Madam!!!”
She stared to her left and saw a
driver flagging her down as he tried to overtake. She pressed the controller
for the window and turned in his direction.
“Flat
tyre!” he shouted as he sped off.
She instantly hit her brake. She
didn’t do her routine check before leaving the office. Honks
blasted behind her. “Just shut up all of you!”
she shouted. She heaved a sigh of relief as the traffic light went red. She
kept her door and window firmly closed as some people walked over to bang on
her door. She ignored them, Wole had eroded her thoughts. “Damn
you, Wole! This is entirely your fault!” she said as she cried.
She looked up and had a blurred
vision of a man standing in front of her car. She cleaned her eyes and opened
the door to step out. She stared hard. “Wole!” she said, with a smile. His face was
hard and stern. Her smile faded immediately. She approached him slowly as he
stood just a line from the zebra crossing. “Wole?” she called softly.
He took a deep breath as she stood
before him. The lights went green and cars drove past them leaving them in the
centre
“What
are you doing, Wole?” she asked.
He raised an eyebrow. “I
don’t understand, you are the one who came out of your car.”
“Wole…I
am sorry for everything.”
He placed his finger across her
lips. He stepped back slowly and got down on one knee and opened a tiffany box
with a diamond ring before her. “Tola Matthews, would you please marry
me?”
Tola gasped as she covered her
mouth with her right hand.
What a way to propose... ℓ☺ℓ
ReplyDeletechaiiii till nxt week again.....Unc Bolu go soon die of hypertension....kimbs we r missing u here in lag oo. happy new month readers..........greata tins ahead
ReplyDeleteTomi ah ah nau, well it was a sad and interesting episode, Mirabel and Henry? good one. DFH's ending will be one big happy ending I foresee it already
ReplyDeleteWow! Its getting to the climax. Am loving this...
ReplyDeleteEverybody finding love, me sure this won't happen in naija, Wole should come to Lagos Ibadan Express to propose
ReplyDeleteWow!wat a way of proposing....nicely writen dear..hapy new mth readers and to u Tomi...
ReplyDeleteHehe!tomi,u had to end it there... Can't wait for next episode,
ReplyDeleteWole is a suspect! I am pretty sure he deflated Tola's tyre so he could pull off a super proposal.
ReplyDeleteNice one Tomi and thanks for that DM...
ReplyDeleteLalalalalala
ReplyDeletetomi stop punishing me with your with ur suspense cannt wait for d next episode, i guess i nid a prefrential treatment on dis, tomi pls send me a preview of d next episode to read before being posted*smiles*. anywayz cul story i guess i'm falling in luv oooo nd i nid to be proposed to on highway. Lol.
ReplyDeleteI started reading DFH two days ago, and i have been glued to my system every since, when colleagues ask what are u watching so seriously and i would reply: I need to finish this so i could go on with my life. Tommy thanks for keeping me so interested. I wish most guys are like Wole Briggs the world would be a better place.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much everyone! Have a superb month ahead!
ReplyDeleteWow, ok we are going to have a very big love circle here, henry is such a jerk but I think he's cool. Now d guy gets d girl nd d girl gets d guy, who else is not in love? Ok Shola, she might not be anyway. I'm trying to put a face on this characters nd I think Tinsel is d best option...Ade Williams as Mr. Bankole, Alhaji as Mr. Coker, Phillip as David, Kwame as Wole, Ini as Bimpe, Tarila as Tola,Ene as Shola, Kimberly as Angela (except d insane part, dy are both afraid of Alhaji) Henry as .....
ReplyDeleteTomi my darln, its your troublesome reader (guess who) nicely done dear, brilliant work. Ben 10 has finally come to his senses and my dear ini very sharp badt girl and Mr Coker don enter am. Bonus nko? Am sure you know who this is now :D
ReplyDeleteLade oh!!! :D
ReplyDeleteTomi baby :D Bonus na
DeleteNyc one tomi.....ur blog kips me goin! Still lukin 4 my 'Wole Briggs' thou.. I op i find him cuz every1 is in luv!
ReplyDeleteDramatic proposal!!!! hehehe, and they werent accosted by policemen or LASTMA guys. lol. Awesome episode. Mirabel and Henry, uh? Nice twist. I hope Elizabeth and David eventually find healing.
ReplyDeleteNice one Tomi...u keep giving me a reason to look forward to d next episode
ReplyDeletekorede if u open ur eyes u will definitely find ur own wole briggs, there's one made for u. tomi anoda fantastic episode. u refused to tell me if u already have anoda story lined up for us
ReplyDeleteThanks for ur comment. Yes, there's a new one lined up.
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ReplyDeleteNow for my comment. I read from Episode 1 to 25 in one evening, so pardon me cos this is going to be a bit long. I liked the story. I enjoyed the twists and how the plot played out and how you juggled all your major characters without dropping any. You're a really good story teller. I'm sure in a few years you'll be a great storyteller.
ReplyDeleteWhat I noticed:
Your explanation every time a character said something in pidgin.
A few typos
Keep writing. I'll certainly keep reading. Kudos!